Quite a fascinating piece :) well penned!
Intriguingly dreamlike.
would have liked to see Line 5 broken into 2 lines instead of one long lineHave a nice Tuesdaymuch love...
An interesting amalgamation of words and images.
Truth of life................who eats who................
I guess for a tadpole, even a gnat becomes a hamburger.. reads a little like a fairytale.
I'd love to know what the mouse did with the zippers! That insect is quite the Santa!
Makes complete sense, especially about the appetite of a butterfly. They crave hamburgers like no one's business...
When my bank drains I find it quite less than amiable. :)
fun imagine the literal reality of your chosen descriptions
A flash of tales... yum!
Mice with zippers....there is a poem in that:)
Quite a fascinating piece :) well penned!
ReplyDeleteIntriguingly dreamlike.
ReplyDeletewould have liked to see Line 5 broken into 2 lines instead of one long line
ReplyDeleteHave a nice Tuesday
much love...
An interesting amalgamation of words and images.
ReplyDeleteTruth of life................who eats who................
ReplyDeleteI guess for a tadpole, even a gnat becomes a hamburger.. reads a little like a fairytale.
ReplyDeleteI'd love to know what the mouse did with the zippers! That insect is quite the Santa!
ReplyDeleteMakes complete sense, especially about the appetite of a butterfly. They crave hamburgers like no one's business...
ReplyDeleteWhen my bank drains I find it quite less than amiable. :)
ReplyDeletefun imagine the literal reality of your chosen descriptions
ReplyDeleteA flash of tales... yum!
ReplyDeleteMice with zippers....there is a poem in that:)
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