Sunday 28 June 2015

Naturally

The baseball is attending.  Naturally.
Bloods knit, belittling waste.  Naturally.
A deer forces.  Naturally.
Lovely, advisedly hidden, a workshop heals.  Naturally.
Blinking, it gives a silver to a coach,  no longer on show.  Naturally.
And kittens with frantic stopsigns stop.  Naturally. 
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17 comments:

  1. J Cosmo Newbery28 June 2015 at 02:34

    Naturally. I think. Maybe.

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  2. Sumana Roy28 June 2015 at 02:40

    very intense...

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  3. Jae Rose28 June 2015 at 03:19

    I sense a hint of sardonic-ness! The kittens stopping at stop signs made me smile for some reason..maybe because you can't stop a kitten being a kitten - naturally

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  4. kaykuala28 June 2015 at 03:24

    They will make it so as not to bungle, naturally!

    Hank

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  5. Old Egg28 June 2015 at 04:25

    I think you are having a dig at those that use their words so unnaturally as to grate on our ears.

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  6. Unknown28 June 2015 at 04:27

    Very original style.

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  7. brudberg28 June 2015 at 05:11

    Indeed..some truths don't need to be told.

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  8. Kerry O'Connor28 June 2015 at 05:20

    Meaning in abstraction is there for the audience to decipher. I enjoyed the opportunity your poem presented.

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  9. Sanaa Rizvi28 June 2015 at 05:33

    Love the use of repetition.. very effective :D

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  10. Rosemary Nissen-Wade28 June 2015 at 06:32

    You live in an alternate reality - naturally.

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  11. totomai28 June 2015 at 06:38

    It actually offers different interpretation. Which is of course true - naturally.

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  12. Myrna R.28 June 2015 at 12:59

    I like Rosmary's comment. But, I think this is just above my head. Is that naturally?

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  13. Sherry Blue Sky28 June 2015 at 13:19

    Yes, I am smiling. I enjoyed the comments on this poem .

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  14. Donna@LivingFromHappiness28 June 2015 at 16:13

    Well this was a unique read....naturally! (Sorry couldn't resist)

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  15. Jay28 June 2015 at 20:39

    I love the presumption. And the prescription.
    "But those aren't--"
    "Yes, all natural."
    Readers do not make the rules here.

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  16. Gen Giggles 29 June 2015 at 06:12

    I kept reading 'naturally' in Abbott's voice.

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