Wednesday 10 June 2015

Holiday Idyll

The transport is dwindling. 
The courts empty, charming, erect, back. 
A whip rules. 
Limply, lively, a hidden blemish,
A minute skill. 
Earthshaking,  blatantly lopsided, damning,
It gives a side to sand 
No longer aimed with land. 
Posted by at

8 comments:

  1. Anonymous10 June 2015 at 02:32

    I guess you mean 'armed with land'?

    ReplyDelete
  2. Jae Rose10 June 2015 at 05:45

    I sense a degree of irony in the title...i think there's something more afoot in these lines...

    ReplyDelete
  3. Sheilagh Lee10 June 2015 at 07:48

    why do I think of tennis reading this? love this

    ReplyDelete
  4. kaykuala10 June 2015 at 07:49

    Nicely Peter! One can feel the urgency!

    Hank

    ReplyDelete
  5. colleen10 June 2015 at 07:57

    Lots of active words and intrigue!

    ReplyDelete
  6. J Cosmo Newbery11 June 2015 at 03:17

    The whip worries me.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Roslyn Ross11 June 2015 at 05:16

    Cryptic and contained.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Tina Basu13 June 2015 at 10:04

    short and nice

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)