Sunday 7 June 2015

A Dream 1

The tadpole is assuming. 
Footpath repairs like drooping pasta. 
A bank drains - liquidly, amiably hidden;
An insect satisfies. 
It gives a hamburger to a butterfly, no longer catalogued by height. 
And zippers to frantic mice. 
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12 comments:

  1. Sanaa Rizvi9 June 2015 at 04:57

    Quite a fascinating piece :) well penned!

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  2. Rosemary Nissen-Wade9 June 2015 at 06:00

    Intriguingly dreamlike.

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  3. Gillena Cox9 June 2015 at 06:43

    would have liked to see Line 5 broken into 2 lines instead of one long line

    Have a nice Tuesday

    much love...

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  4. Kerry O'Connor9 June 2015 at 06:49

    An interesting amalgamation of words and images.

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  5. Vandana Sharma9 June 2015 at 07:14

    Truth of life................who eats who................

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  6. brudberg9 June 2015 at 07:32

    I guess for a tadpole, even a gnat becomes a hamburger.. reads a little like a fairytale.

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  7. Susan9 June 2015 at 15:02

    I'd love to know what the mouse did with the zippers! That insect is quite the Santa!

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  8. Unknown9 June 2015 at 15:38

    Makes complete sense, especially about the appetite of a butterfly. They crave hamburgers like no one's business...

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  9. Marian9 June 2015 at 16:43

    When my bank drains I find it quite less than amiable. :)

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  10. cosmos cami9 June 2015 at 18:13

    fun imagine the literal reality of your chosen descriptions

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  11. Magaly Guerrero10 June 2015 at 07:15

    A flash of tales... yum!

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  12. Cressida de Nova15 June 2015 at 18:15

    Mice with zippers....there is a poem in that:)

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